What is going on?

Posted: September 16, 2011 in The Writer's Roundabout


Thank you all for all your love and support. I never expected it to be this big. We still have five writers left so there are still so many twist and turns!

If this your first time here, or you have no idea why you are here orrrrr you are carrying a very heavy last, click here to read the posts written by me, Rj, Wole, Sandra and Terdoh.

Up next, we have my personal persin, Onyinye (@nwaokpoechi) who will continue the story ……


The early morning rays hit Jade’s face. She turned around, winced a bit and her eyes fluttered open really quickly. The pain in her side was absolutely unbearable. That was kind of strange seeing as the last thing she remembered was the insanely awesome bouts of pleasure she experienced with Katt. She held her palm up and saw she was covered in blood. She looked around. Make that a pool of blood. Her own blood. And no Katt in sight.

‘Oh my God, oh my God. Blood of Jesus! Jesus, save your daughter!!’ It took her a while before she realized that no sounds were coming out of her mouth. She held her palms up to the light coming in from the window and she could see they were already turning white. ‘God, please, I can’t die here. If you bring me out of this alive, I will dedicate my entire life to you.’

She mustered up her last bit of energy, and screamed, “Help! Help!” There had to be a God. And millions of angels rooting for her because soon after, someone came rushing into the place. She didn’t have the strength to take in all the details of the man, but she could tell he was tall and dark. He carried her and she slumped in his arms. With her head limp and hanging from his arms, she saw her friend Shola at the extreme end of the room. She had been marinated in her own blood, with her tongue and her jaw beside her. There were flies. Lots of flies. She would have vomited if not that she had an empty stomach. “Shola…, help Shola”, was all she said before she passed out again.

She woke up to find herself in a shoddy six-spring bed, with a terrible headache. Her palm had been bandaged. She tried to move, and that’s when the guy whom she assumed had saved her life walked in. “How are you feeling?”

“Better”. She wanted to thank him, thank him profusely but she found herself asking, “Where am I, and who are you and why did you save me?”. She paused to catch her breath. “Please what is your name?”

He laughed.

“Calm down, missy. My name is Jason, and that’s all you need to know.”

“Thank you, for saving my life,” she finally said.

“There’s no need to thank me yet,” was what she got back.

She wondered what that meant and found herself staring at her saviour’s face. ‘Omo, this Jason na fine boy sha. Definitely p-setting material. Maybe after all this is over, we can hook …’ Her thoughts trailed off as she remembered her promise to God. And then Shola. Her own personal Sholzzy Sholz.

“Where is Shola?!” she blurted.

“Who is Shola?”

“My friend.  She was lying there. I told you to help her! I told you to help her!”. She broke down and wept uncontrollably. Curse Sadiq. Curse that stupid Chinese gay porn that even prompted Shola to help her out in the first place.

“Oh. She’s dead. And eat your food.” He pointed to the tray on the floor beside her bed. With that he stood up and walked out of the room. A bout of general hysterics ensued. She could hear a clicking sound. He had probably locked her in. She panicked but she was too weak to check or even think of escaping. Moreover, she had absolutely no idea where she was.  She was lost in her thoughts when she heard a faint sound coming from the other end of the room. It was a bit spacious – the room, and that bed she lay on was the only piece of furniture in it. She stood up and walked to the window where the sounds were coming from. She opened the curtains a little bit and saw the man that had saved her life furiously pounding away at a chicken with a bat. When he was done, the chicken was all mangled because all the bones had been broken, but it still wasn’t dead. Then he carried it into a metal bucket, and set it ablaze. She shuddered as he threw the bat far into the distance. Then he pulled his phone out of his pocket and dialled a number. All she heard was ‘It’s done’, and ‘She’s well’ before he cut the call.

She was gripped by immense fear and before she could even put her hands to her mouth, she let out a scream. The man turned and started walking towards the window, his white shirt sporting streaks of blood, and his eyes met hers.

“Hello, missy”


Jason sha … but wait why was a chicken killed? 

Well, that all depends on the next writer ……

Chineyre choosing the name out of the calabash 

And the next writer is …..

Bukky @BoukkieO

Head back here on Monday by 9:30 to read what Bukky has to offer us….. 

Have a great weekend!!!

  1. ok i like the way it’s going,buh it was too short…. 😦 oo nd sad , shola died…buh wait…jade no dey die???lol

  2. terdoh says:

    “Her own personal Sholzzy Sholz.” Haha! Life is good.

  3. SlevinCalevra says:

    Jade should’ve died nah 😦 😥

  4. @trafels says:

    Jade tho’…P-setting after Katt’s furious pounding (why evils?)

  5. kennibal says:

    This one was short. The killing of a chicken with a bat instead of cutting the throat is somewhat ritual.

    But how will Jade be thinking ‘setting P’ in her condition?? Na wa o

  6. raihanah says:

    A writer should just come and take us back to reality! This is all a big wonderful nightmare! Hian… Set P with ritualist ke?

  7. @FoluShaw says:




    The plot thickens.

    The twist deepens.

    Charles dickens?


  8. SlevinCalevra says:

    This Jade reminds me of Reni from baba blue’s red lipstick. She’s a ho and a ho’ that just won’t die!

  9. Genesis says:

    …And Jason has to be the most Purple Gay Name since Justin (Beiber). But then again… What do I know? 😦 Nice Twist tho. 😀

    • OOkpoechi says:

      I had Jason Derulo in mind when I wrote that. Too bad Terdoh already wrote his; it would’ve been cool to see his spin on it.
      Thanks 🙂

  10. @DayDesola says:

    The Chinese gay porn keeps coming back up ( -̩̩̩͡˛ -̩̩̩͡ )

  11. So Katt just nailed Jade & vanished? No bank acct details,no nothing? .. LOL.. Pimp Katt. So Shola is finally dead. Sad.

  12. E says:

    this was nice. i liked it. (y)

  13. Ngufy says:

    ….and the plot thickens. Where are we headed please? I wish for the first time ever I could just flip to the last page!
    Jade is setting P in her head with all the blood and screwing katt gave her? LOOL. Only in dreams….
    Someone wake Jade up already… Before she finds herself directing “the chinese gay porn”.

  14. Coopzz says:

    so many twists and turns. good job sha

  15. adaora says:

    this post was funny and sad..’sholzzy shola’ and p-setting when you don’t even know where you are? chai! conji is bad!

  16. You-Know-Who says:

    Jade and I are like, twins! There is always room for one more p! Lol!

    And I love the part about the chicken. Nice one Onyinye 😉

  17. Lolu says:

    I like this…
    Okija Ritual ‘tinz’…
    Decent effort..

  18. Kemmiiii says:

    Haha!! They want to use Jade to do peppersoup!

  19. ThinkTank! says:

    I kinda sorta like this.

    Interesting turn of events…Finally someone with the guts to kill off Shola after I set her on the path to oblivion. And interesting additional character. Dont like the name. Love the character. Ritual chicken slaughter? Excellent!

    Interesting to see where this goes…

  20. obi_jay says:

    hmm….where are we going?

  21. Jade should die jhor! Warris all this?! And I agree with Sleving. Reni and Jade are hoes #NoFarmImplement

  22. ibetapassmynebo says:

    Loool from frying pan to hell fire

    Wait till mon…loool

    Nice one dearie. . .

  23. lara says:

    Hahaha Jade die na lol

  24. MizB says:

    Ah! All u bloodthirsty people. Wasn’t d blood of d sacrificed chicken enough? Or Sola’s?lol

    How come she died sef? And just after Terdoh resurrected her? Issorai, weird story we xpected, very very weird itz turning out to be. Interesting too. Can’t wait to read what’s in store..

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